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Tremendous!

Despite the feeble shunning of your work from other people on this review list I have to agree that theres only one thing I found wrong with that animation. Quality of sound. That's it it just sounds a little muffled you can get much better versions of that song with tons of better quality.

I actually loved the style you chose and I thought that was pretty damn good for a first animation. I tell you what you should do? Do this style again but use different songs from different bands. Funny songs obviously.

I think its a really funny strange little style almost like weebl n bob wierd except its not two eggs sitting hurling words out of their lips and screaming about pie. I think you should continue using the same style because it was enjoyable to watch. Perhaps you could, like some have suggested, give the guys or guy or girl or.....graphic the opportunity to become more active. instead of their faces being the action perhaps give them two dots as hands and give them some freedom!

Otherwise I loved that, fantastic, sorry this is so long. Dont listen to all of the suggestions you get. Yes its constructive criticism but somewhere along the line animations like this are going to become popular and crazy because of how strange they appear. Good luck with your animations! 5/5 10/10

RacmusDK responds:

It is not my first animation! ;)
But I will try to give them hands, and make them a little more "Alive"
I really tried my best making them active (or something, I'm danish :P)
But it is really hard when they are "Clocks" So I tried making the clock their mouth.
Thanks for the great review.

- Racmus

An "Animator Vs Animation" Stunner!!

No words can say anything bad about that animation. It was fluent and everything lead into something better. Make more, maybe add some colours as your next project.

gankro responds:

mayhaps... It's kinda contrary to the style though...

Unbelieable

Worth every second of watching it and worth 5/5 10/10 for my vote.

That was VERY fluent and swiftly animated.

It looked really smooth and didnt have ANY dodgy areas or unexplainable actions.

Well done, excellent animating. Do more

Added to favourites

DonkeysBazooka responds:

cool, k, im on it

Another Krinkels crafted masterpiece!

Really good! fans of Madness should all like this, I agree character appearance was random but theres death theres blood and violence ITS STILL A MADNESS MASTERPIECE!!! Excellent animation and excellent sound and graphics brings me back to Madness 1 with the bird song in the background! Good work

ZayanuZaroc responds:

Thank you!

Not too bad

You have a good grip on sprite flash animations. But they are a little blocky with their movements, slow sometimes too shaky.

It was a good little storyline, In the future I think for the benefit of anyone reading the boxes you should have a text box that prompts the use of a spacebar.

It was a really good animation on the other hand. So dont feel like this is a bad review you got a 3/5 and 7/10 thats good.

Keep it up try some new anims and good luck with any other flash movies you make :D

Pikachuprower responds:

thanks at least your were being kind rather than other people I can mention >.>

Impressive!

I've seen work like this at college, someone did a freaky tim burton style animation but the TV that was part of the background had a real program playing of him playing the guitar. I agree it is a pretty good effect.

I liked your animation, it was inspirational to see your thoughts played out in an animation its really good! I dont see why you shouldnt pass judgment with this its excellent. Good song, funny lyrics , funny story! 5/5 10/10

(BTW no sweat with the loader it looks fine, good writing style its abstract and gives the person waiting a bit more to look at than the average Arial or Times New Roman style font)

Make another your a good animator.

TylerLandis responds:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Hearing responses means a lot.

Now focusing on a programming course in video games. I more or less do animation in my spare time as a hobby. I attended college for two years in which most of my tasks were aniamtion based. My skills are limited...however im always read to improve xD.

Age 33, Male

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